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****UPDATE: Deadline extended to Saturday, April 16 at 11:59 PM, Eastern Time.****
Tuesday, April 5, 2011
Part VI is now open for submission
The more entries the better the potential of the story. Make your voice heard.
Deadline for submissions for Part VI is: Saturday, April 9, 2011 at 11:59 PM, Eastern Time.
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****UPDATE: Deadline extended to Saturday, April 16 at 11:59 PM, Eastern Time.****
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****UPDATE: Deadline extended to Saturday, April 16 at 11:59 PM, Eastern Time.****
Part V - Story 1
Part V has been added to the Google Document. You can click to read the entire story or scroll down to read this week's submission.
There was one submission this week - by Maria Fisher.
-by Maria Fisher
...a large house in old Hollywood. Most of those places have been done
and redone, with each new big shot tearing out the old stuff to put in
new old stuff. But this one still had the golden-age feel. It was the
little touches--the windows and electrical outlets. You could tell, if
it ever got cold in SoCal, it would have been a drafty place.
“A little spitfire maid named Rita met me at the servant's entrance.
She had the look and attitude of a terrier, and you could tell that
she ran the rest of the staff by sheer will. But today she was
spooked, showing too much white around her eyes.
"So I introduce myself, say, 'You must be Rita,' and ask what's the
trouble. She says, 'It's Peepsie.'
"Now, she's got a pretty thick Spanish accent, and she's nervous, so
she's talking too fast. I had to have her repeat herself a couple
times. 'It's Peepsie. It's Peepsie.'
"So I say, 'Your name's Peepsie?' She loses patience and starts
jabbering in Spanish, but the she stops and talks to me really slowly.
"'No, I'm Rita. You come this way.'
"She pulls me into the house through the kitchen and a bunch of these
really narrow halls, these servant halls that are really dark and the
wood floor creeks. When she stops me at the end of the hall, it's in
front of this tiny old door.
"You could tell the door had been there forever because the doorknob
had all these ridges on it, so you could see all the colors it had
been painted over the years. So I grab the handle, but before I open
it, I turn to Rita.
"’Peepsie is in there,’ she tells me. I say to her. ‘Look, Rita, what
exactly is Peepsie?’
“She struggles for a minute, then says, ‘He's a little...uh... little bird.’
“I look at the door again and say, ‘A little bird. And it's trapped in here?’
"’Yes,’ she says, ‘Peepsie. He needs to go back to his cage.’
“So I said, ‘You need me to catch your canary?’
"’Oh, no,’ she says.
"So now I don't know what to think. I open the door, and it's a small
library with a large window seat and a bird cage. You can see Rita's
been cleaning the cage, because it's open and there's a couple
newspapers and a vacuum right there.
"So I slip into the room, careful not to open the door too wide in
case the bird flies past me, but I don't see him. I look at all the
shelves and think, ‘This bird could be anywhere.’ I'm sort of creeping
into the room, trying to find the bird, when Rita opens the door wide
behind me and stares.
"’Careful woman,’ I say, then look around for the bird, but I don't
see it. Now Rita's just standing in the door, and I see where she's
looking. I think she's looking at the cage."
"Then I hear the vacuum chirp."
The women all start laughing. "Oh no!" Shannon said.
Nomad, also laughing, confirmed. "Yep, that poor woman was using the
hose attachment to vacuum up the bottom of the cage, then she must
have gotten distracted, waved the hose around, and sucked up poor
Peepsie."
"So I got the vacuum all broken down and open the bag, and there's
this dusty little canary hopping around. The poor thing didn't even
try to fly away. I just scooped him up and put him on his perch."
"Was he ok?" Pamela asked, once they stopped laughing.
"Seemed to be," Nomad said. "But you better believe that bird got the
ride of his life."
They all laughed again.
"But the really odd thing about that, was what else I found in the vacuum."
There was one submission this week - by Maria Fisher.
~*~
PART V-by Maria Fisher
...a large house in old Hollywood. Most of those places have been done
and redone, with each new big shot tearing out the old stuff to put in
new old stuff. But this one still had the golden-age feel. It was the
little touches--the windows and electrical outlets. You could tell, if
it ever got cold in SoCal, it would have been a drafty place.
“A little spitfire maid named Rita met me at the servant's entrance.
She had the look and attitude of a terrier, and you could tell that
she ran the rest of the staff by sheer will. But today she was
spooked, showing too much white around her eyes.
"So I introduce myself, say, 'You must be Rita,' and ask what's the
trouble. She says, 'It's Peepsie.'
"Now, she's got a pretty thick Spanish accent, and she's nervous, so
she's talking too fast. I had to have her repeat herself a couple
times. 'It's Peepsie. It's Peepsie.'
"So I say, 'Your name's Peepsie?' She loses patience and starts
jabbering in Spanish, but the she stops and talks to me really slowly.
"'No, I'm Rita. You come this way.'
"She pulls me into the house through the kitchen and a bunch of these
really narrow halls, these servant halls that are really dark and the
wood floor creeks. When she stops me at the end of the hall, it's in
front of this tiny old door.
"You could tell the door had been there forever because the doorknob
had all these ridges on it, so you could see all the colors it had
been painted over the years. So I grab the handle, but before I open
it, I turn to Rita.
"’Peepsie is in there,’ she tells me. I say to her. ‘Look, Rita, what
exactly is Peepsie?’
“She struggles for a minute, then says, ‘He's a little...uh... little bird.’
“I look at the door again and say, ‘A little bird. And it's trapped in here?’
"’Yes,’ she says, ‘Peepsie. He needs to go back to his cage.’
“So I said, ‘You need me to catch your canary?’
"’Oh, no,’ she says.
"So now I don't know what to think. I open the door, and it's a small
library with a large window seat and a bird cage. You can see Rita's
been cleaning the cage, because it's open and there's a couple
newspapers and a vacuum right there.
"So I slip into the room, careful not to open the door too wide in
case the bird flies past me, but I don't see him. I look at all the
shelves and think, ‘This bird could be anywhere.’ I'm sort of creeping
into the room, trying to find the bird, when Rita opens the door wide
behind me and stares.
"’Careful woman,’ I say, then look around for the bird, but I don't
see it. Now Rita's just standing in the door, and I see where she's
looking. I think she's looking at the cage."
"Then I hear the vacuum chirp."
The women all start laughing. "Oh no!" Shannon said.
Nomad, also laughing, confirmed. "Yep, that poor woman was using the
hose attachment to vacuum up the bottom of the cage, then she must
have gotten distracted, waved the hose around, and sucked up poor
Peepsie."
"So I got the vacuum all broken down and open the bag, and there's
this dusty little canary hopping around. The poor thing didn't even
try to fly away. I just scooped him up and put him on his perch."
"Was he ok?" Pamela asked, once they stopped laughing.
"Seemed to be," Nomad said. "But you better believe that bird got the
ride of his life."
They all laughed again.
"But the really odd thing about that, was what else I found in the vacuum."
Monday, March 28, 2011
Part IV has been posted...
There wasn't any submissions during the last opening, so I took in the spirit of continuing the story, I have added my own version of a continuation. Click here to read the story thus far.
Anyone can make a submission to Part V of our story, including previous contributors. Remember: if there are multiple submissions, I will post 3 to the site and allow the readers to comment to pick their favorite.
Deadline for submissions for Part V is: Saturday, April 2, 2011 at 11:59 PM, EST.
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Anyone can make a submission to Part V of our story, including previous contributors. Remember: if there are multiple submissions, I will post 3 to the site and allow the readers to comment to pick their favorite.
Deadline for submissions for Part V is: Saturday, April 2, 2011 at 11:59 PM, EST.
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Sunday, March 13, 2011
PART III has been posted - Part IV is now open for submission
Another deadline has passed, and there was one submission. This one is by Rachel Hofford. Rachel, thank you for your entry.
To read Rachel Hofford's entry and the previous parts of the story (using Google Docs), click here.
I'm really enjoying how this is working and I want to thank Maria Fisher and Rachel Hofford for helping to keep this story going.
Deadline for submissions for Part IV is: Saturday, March 19, 2011 at 11:59 PM, EST.
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To read Rachel Hofford's entry and the previous parts of the story (using Google Docs), click here.
I'm really enjoying how this is working and I want to thank Maria Fisher and Rachel Hofford for helping to keep this story going.
Deadline for submissions for Part IV is: Saturday, March 19, 2011 at 11:59 PM, EST.
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Tuesday, March 8, 2011
PART II Has Been Posted
It appears that we did have a submission, sent on 03/04 that was stuck in my inbox. Because of this, we have part II of our story. Thank you to Maria Fisher for your submission, and I apologize for missing it originally. To read Maria Fisher's entry and the previous part of the story (using Google Docs), click here. I will add on to this document as we create this story further.
Also, Maria suggested a great idea - giving you, the blog followers options on which submission is used. I LOVE this idea and can't wait until multiple submissions are entered so that we can all participate. Once we reach more than 3 submissions for a single segment, I will pick the "top 3" and request that the blog followers vote in the comments for the entry that will be used.
This is really exciting and I already love how the story is evolving. If you're interested in participating, please visit this blog post for directions on how to submit your content.
Deadline for submissions for Part III is: Saturday, March 12, 2011 at 11:59 PM, EST.
Also, Maria suggested a great idea - giving you, the blog followers options on which submission is used. I LOVE this idea and can't wait until multiple submissions are entered so that we can all participate. Once we reach more than 3 submissions for a single segment, I will pick the "top 3" and request that the blog followers vote in the comments for the entry that will be used.
This is really exciting and I already love how the story is evolving. If you're interested in participating, please visit this blog post for directions on how to submit your content.
Deadline for submissions for Part III is: Saturday, March 12, 2011 at 11:59 PM, EST.
Monday, March 7, 2011
Extended Deadline
No submissions have been made yet, so there's still time. New deadline for part II of the first CollaborWriter story is on Friday, March 11. Visit this post to submit your content.
Monday, February 28, 2011
Emailing Content for Submission
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